No you can't, this story mostly centres around Emily, Ayaka and Haru so I haven't really thought of an ending focusing on Michi :'))
Is Michi your favourite? He's a ray of sunshine 🥺 I'm actually thinking about making a dating sim one day and if I ever get to it.. You'd definitely get to see more of him in that case ;DDD
I can tell you’ve poured your whole heart in it: from the moment i saw that autumn-colored park i was already fascinated by your art. So beautiful! And it must have taken you ages to do such a detailed work.
I am so jealous right now….
Even if you did not compose the music, you really have good taste because it is well chosen and really fitting.
The weakest part is the story, though. I am not saying that it is bad, just that i did not find it up to the same level as your art.
My first impression was that, at times, it felt a bit “abrupt”. For instance, when Ayaka is waiting for Emily in the park and both friends go to the riverside to talk, i felt that it was over too soon—a couple sentences for both and then Emily now somehow feels better? However, it may be that i need more time to rant when i am feeling down? Who knows.
Then i thought that it was a bit cliché. But my first ending was literally the “cliché” one, so i guess this is something you already know and did on purpose.
Lastly, i think there are some inconsistencies in subsequent runs. The other ending i reached is the train, but nowhere in that story line is mentioned that the “mystery character” does not speak Japanese, that would be a pretty good clue for Emily of who may he be. I do not have that much experience with visual novels to know whether this is common; maybe i was just expecting an unreasonably cohesive world.
I hope you do not get discouraged by what i said; it is just what i think would improve the game for me. And none of these “issues” prevented me of trully enjoying your game.
HELLO!! I am not discouraged at all by your words, in fact, I feel the exact opposite!! Thank you SO much for pointing all of that out, I know I'm kind of an inexperienced writer and I hope I'll get better at that 😤✨
This visual novel was mostly supposed to be something short to introduce a new oc (you can take a guess haha) to my followers on Instagram but eventually, I got a little too absorbed into it and ended up coding the whole thing and adding more branches :0
It has been a big dream of mine to make a visual novel since I started doing art so although I spent more time doing it than I should've, I don't regret a bit! And I believe that if I ever decide to make another (I hope!) I'll pay more attention to the storyline and events and make it more interesting!!
Thank you again for playing and enjoying my game, you made me very happy!! And also thank you for your detailed analysis 😭🙏 Very appreciated 💖💞
Everything is so damn cUTEE ToT!! I already knew the art was going to be good but oMg the backgrounds and sprites are so beautiful mann...I believe in Michi supremacy.
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Can you get an ending with Michi?
No you can't, this story mostly centres around Emily, Ayaka and Haru so I haven't really thought of an ending focusing on Michi :'))
Is Michi your favourite? He's a ray of sunshine 🥺 I'm actually thinking about making a dating sim one day and if I ever get to it.. You'd definitely get to see more of him in that case ;DDD
Also!! Thank you so much for playing 🙏
I can tell you’ve poured your whole heart in it: from the moment i saw that autumn-colored park i was already fascinated by your art. So beautiful! And it must have taken you ages to do such a detailed work.
I am so jealous right now….
Even if you did not compose the music, you really have good taste because it is well chosen and really fitting.
The weakest part is the story, though. I am not saying that it is bad, just that i did not find it up to the same level as your art.
My first impression was that, at times, it felt a bit “abrupt”. For instance, when Ayaka is waiting for Emily in the park and both friends go to the riverside to talk, i felt that it was over too soon—a couple sentences for both and then Emily now somehow feels better? However, it may be that i need more time to rant when i am feeling down? Who knows.
Then i thought that it was a bit cliché. But my first ending was literally the “cliché” one, so i guess this is something you already know and did on purpose.
Lastly, i think there are some inconsistencies in subsequent runs. The other ending i reached is the train, but nowhere in that story line is mentioned that the “mystery character” does not speak Japanese, that would be a pretty good clue for Emily of who may he be. I do not have that much experience with visual novels to know whether this is common; maybe i was just expecting an unreasonably cohesive world.
I hope you do not get discouraged by what i said; it is just what i think would improve the game for me. And none of these “issues” prevented me of trully enjoying your game.
Very, very well done!
HELLO!! I am not discouraged at all by your words, in fact, I feel the exact opposite!! Thank you SO much for pointing all of that out, I know I'm kind of an inexperienced writer and I hope I'll get better at that 😤✨
This visual novel was mostly supposed to be something short to introduce a new oc (you can take a guess haha) to my followers on Instagram but eventually, I got a little too absorbed into it and ended up coding the whole thing and adding more branches :0
It has been a big dream of mine to make a visual novel since I started doing art so although I spent more time doing it than I should've, I don't regret a bit! And I believe that if I ever decide to make another (I hope!) I'll pay more attention to the storyline and events and make it more interesting!!
Thank you again for playing and enjoying my game, you made me very happy!! And also thank you for your detailed analysis 😭🙏 Very appreciated 💖💞
Everything is so damn cUTEE ToT!! I already knew the art was going to be good but oMg the backgrounds and sprites are so beautiful mann...I believe in Michi supremacy.
OMG THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH LILAC 😭🙏 This was the sweetest thing ever?? You made me literally so happy rn! Michi supremacy so true <333
This was really cute! I loved the friends and the overarching story <3
Thank you so much for playing 😭🙏 I'm literally sooo happy you enjoyed my game!!
THEYRE SO CUTE!!!! I wish them all my happiness aaa,,,
NO U!!! They wish you all their happiness back (along with me ;D)